Can this be improved?

[Ramodkk]

I like Rev 3 and Ben's suggestion.

GTA3 font looks liks imple font unless it's positioned like the one in the logo of the game IMO.

 

[Ben]

Even still..none of these to me really stand out at all. Everything looks so flat and windows paintish, less professional, etc.

The card needs to look..."used"...vintage almost. Rustic, old...who knows

 

[diduknowthat]

rev 3.2
http://i30.tinypic.com/2e5jlsn.jpg/B]

With or without little hearts guys?

Even still..none of these to me really stand out at all. Everything looks so flat and windows paintish, less professional, etc.

The card needs to look..."used"...vintage almost. Rustic, old...who knows

I see, I'll see to that in the next revision.

 

[Ben]

rev 3.2
http://i30.tinypic.com/2e5jlsn.jpg/B]

With or without little hearts guys?



I see, I'll see to that in the next revision.

I think the hearts add to it. Keep them

 

[diduknowthat]

rev 3.3
http://i26.tinypic.com/25qrbpg.jpg

vintage edition

 

[Ben]

Hmm..adding some noise or something like this might make it better.

 

[diduknowthat]

phew...after countless tutorials, and following Ben's picture, lo and behold...

REV 4
http://i32.tinypic.com/2uiyvx4.jpg

 

[Ramodkk]

now, that looks sweet!

 

[Mitch?]

it's ok, a tad busy, like, it'll be hard to reproduce on smaller items, but its good

 

[TFT]

Keep the font, keep the font
Now it's looking good

 

[diduknowthat]

it's ok, a tad busy, like, it'll be hard to reproduce on smaller items, but its good

Oh yeah, forgot to mention, I also designed a simplified version of the logo, i'll lost it later.

 

[cohen]

i voted for - It looks pretty good.....

But i have no suggestions.... so it looks good.

 

[diduknowthat]

Here it is, the two simplified versions of the logo, one for white background and one for black blackground.

http://i31.tinypic.com/2n1fhfk.jpg

http://i30.tinypic.com/2q3877q.jpg

 

[cohen]

Here it is, the two simplified versions of the logo, one for white background and one for black blackground.

http://i31.tinypic.com/2n1fhfk.jpg

http://i30.tinypic.com/2q3877q.jpg

i like the white background.

 

[Sir Travis D]

Where's the speaker? I don't like it now.

 

[diduknowthat]

I got rid of the speaker to simplify the drawing more. Keep in mind that this is the version that you'd probably see on paper and other small places.