Brutally Honest Critiques

Kornowski said:
It's a shame the bit of it's wing is cropped out, otherwise, nice composition! I'd maybe raise the mids and lower the highlights a little though!
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Yeah unfortunately that's where he got in my lens.

How's this?

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voyagerfan99 said:
And to be fair to Justin I'll move his picture :)



In my opinion it's too over-exposed in front of the couple.
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jnskyliner34 said:
It is? Looks properly exposed on my monitor.
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spirit said:
Exposure looks fine here too.
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Kornowski said:
If anything a little under-exposed, but nah, looks fine.
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Overall the exposure looks fine, but levels could be tweaked a tad. The shadows cast by the trees over some of the faces are on the darker side, while the sun is causing overexposure on portions of the walkway.

BTW Travis, I think you should invest in some monitor calibration equipment :P
 
WRXGuy1 said:
I have a 28" Hanns-G LCD and while it's not bad, it has horrible color reproduction. I had to get a Spyder3 to calibrate it so it's usable.
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I just put a Spyder4 on my wish list on Amazon last night. I was playing around with the color settings on my ASUS monitor and saw quite a difference with each setting.
 
Looks a bit out of focus. Also vignetting is a bit heavy. However, that's a solid capture of the bikers in the air!
 
jnskyliner34 said:
Looks a bit out of focus. Also vignetting is a bit heavy. However, that's a solid capture of the bikers in the air!
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It's Facebook bumming the quality, it's pretty sharp. Yeah, actually, it is a bit heavy - I have an addiction to vignettes, haha. Thanks, Justin!
 
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I'm about to enter this shot in a national contest with an "environmental" theme, so I'd like the bitter truth, don't be afraid to hold back.

If there's something else that you see on my Flickr Photostream, feel free to select something and tell me.

Thanks guys!
 
EvanK said:
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I'm about to enter this shot in a national contest with an "environmental" theme, so I'd like the bitter truth, don't be afraid to hold back.

If there's something else that you see on my Flickr Photostream, feel free to select something and tell me.

Thanks guys!
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It's very nice but the exposure is a little unbalanced, especially the dark part on the top right corner. Other than that it's very well executed.

Have you tried having just the flower and reflection on the left? (just an idea)
 
Come on Mr. Danny you've come a long way taking those pics and editing them, don't slack on the uploading! Give us a flickr link or something! :D
 
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